Mad Cheese Disease!!!
My craving for cheese,
Has assumed an unbelievable proportion,
Even if on paltry lease,
Please to me, a good chunk do apportion!
It’s been a long while,
To be exact, more than three whole weeks,
Not seen cheese in a mile,
With longing, my every taste bud so reeks!
Nor will I have none of,
The measly cheese spread; so totally not worth it,
Out, it all, will I so cough,
Only the real thing, does my tongue now deem fit!
Sliced, or diced all nice,
Shredded, with melt-in-the-mouth flowing ease,
It’ll all be gone, in a trice,
If I jus’ lay my hands on them; my moment seize!
The sudden urge to binge,
Out of apparent nowhere, has suddenly so sprung
But, my tummy does singe,
Not so much before, with such craving, has it rung!
I need cheese, I want cheese!
Come this weekend, and truly metamorphose, will I!
A pig I’ll be; you may me tease!
I’ll devour them all; bid the pizzas and lasagnes goodbye!
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6 Comments:
Can you take criticism? - if so, don't go in for too much of rhyme; it will spoil the flow of your thoughts...thinking too much for a word...
If you are offended, just delete the comment :)
2 more days till you get the antidote
{a}
can u take praise?? i think the rhyme is what makes your poems so endearing!! more more more pls!!!
{a}
Oh!
Didn't mean that the poem is any less endearing...
Supernova, I guess your `a' has misconstrued my comment!
Sincere apologies to you and a!
Thanks for the suggestion, sowhatsup... It's jus' that I like rhyming my poems...It comes quite naturally to me... I really don't spend time thinking of rhyming words, it jus' flows... No need for any apology! Neither of us has misconstrued your comment... To each, his/her opinion! :-)
Yeah, 2 more days, A... Hope the desire for cheese doesn't die by then!!!
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